http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/wordpress/2002/09/05/show-dont-tell/ Cheating on the Kobayashi Maru since 2001 Tue, 12 May 2026 10:17:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.11 http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/wordpress/2002/09/05/show-dont-tell/#comment-103 Tue, 10 Sep 2002 02:39:03 +0000 http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/wordpress/2002/09/05/show-dont-tell/#comment-103 Welcome to the movement, Liz. Thanks, Jintian - I wasn't planning on revising much of the end. It's the middle that will take some time. Welcome to the movement, Liz. Thanks, Jintian - I wasn’t planning on revising much of the end. It’s the middle that will take some time.

]]> http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/wordpress/2002/09/05/show-dont-tell/#comment-102 Sun, 08 Sep 2002 16:13:58 +0000 http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/wordpress/2002/09/05/show-dont-tell/#comment-102 Just wanted to let you know I'm eagerly awaiting this revision. It's been a while since I read the story but I remember enjoying it quite a lot. The last line was especially awesome, though I don't know if that was one of the planned changes -- but it was such a memorable closing note that it's stuck in my mind, ever since. Just wanted to let you know I’m eagerly awaiting this revision. It’s been a while since I read the story but I remember enjoying it quite a lot. The last line was especially awesome, though I don’t know if that was one of the planned changes — but it was such a memorable closing note that it’s stuck in my mind, ever since.

]]> http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/wordpress/2002/09/05/show-dont-tell/#comment-101 Fri, 06 Sep 2002 07:47:47 +0000 http://www.ficml.org/jemimap/wordpress/2002/09/05/show-dont-tell/#comment-101 The line must be drawn here: You tell 'em, Jemima. The line must be drawn here: You tell ‘em, Jemima.

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